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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with internet and what solutions can you suggest??

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The invention of the computer and the
internet
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 is one of the biggest achievements of technology. While it has become a part of our day to day life by enabling us to share, store and analyze the
information
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, it has
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 created some issues.
This
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internet
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 and provide solutions for the same. The major drawbacks of the
internet
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 are
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 increase in the number of
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cyber crimes
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cybercrimes
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 and
loading
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the loading
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 of false
information
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 on it. Lack of adequate knowledge about how to secure online
information
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 can be very dangerous sometimes.
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 can be explained by online money laundering scams managed by professional hackers who are extremely good at keeping no trace of crime performed. Punjab National Bank scam is a very good example of
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 fraud.
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, people reading false
information
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 over the
internet
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 are easily misled into believing something which is not rational and
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can affect an individual very badly.
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, one of my friends read about a diet and exercise program online and started following it. Soon after
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 she started having issues of hypertension and severe backache. So it is extremely necessary to control the
information
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 present on the
internet
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. Improvement of
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cyber security
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cybersecurity
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 along with basic awareness programs to prevent
cyber
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 crimes needs to be a part of
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a government
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 initiative.
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, face recognition or retinal scan for digital transactions and no sharing of security pin with anybody can prevent these attacks to a certain extent. People should be made aware of the dangers of sharing their personal
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 and account details with others. Thorough scrutinisation under strict laws should be done for all the
information
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 on the
internet
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.
Information
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 without proof or evidence needs to be removed and banned from
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the digital
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 database under
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 law enforcement. The
internet
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 is a miracle baby of technology. Though it has tremendous advantages, one cannot ignore
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 problems associated with it. There are some solutions mentioned above
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 can control these problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cybersecurity
  • phishing
  • identity theft
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • social isolation
  • internet addiction
  • data privacy
  • digital literacy
  • regulations
  • awareness programs
  • manipulate
  • proliferation
  • consent
  • escalated
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