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Nowadays, many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children ?

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Technology has become more accessible than it has ever been. Personal computers have become an essential and required part of a large number of people. Computers are being used by children all the way to adults.
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 computers are being utilised by youth for education purposes most of them is for playing
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 which comes with its own pros as well as cons. Computer
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 are being developed since the 20th century and have become more immersive and educational than ever before. Some of the
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 aimed at kids are designed in a way to encourage creative thinking in young minds.
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 involving problem solving and teamwork can train the mind at an early age to develop valuable qualitative skills.
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, Abacus is a
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 game that helps kids to learn basic maths using a colourful and engaging cube puzzle.
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 helps to educate the kid about basic mathematics which we use every day in
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 do bring some negative aspect as well.
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 are targeting to capture the attention of the user for a longer time thereby leading to kids or teens playing
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 for hours. Certain
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 may contain inappropriate content which can influence a child's mind in a bad way. Playing
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 for a long time can
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 lead to weaker eyesight and the blue light coming from the screen can affect the quality of sleep at a younger age. Summing up, just like a coin even
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 have two sides. Having access to the right
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 can help nourish a young brain but we should
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 be aware of the content they are getting exposed to.
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