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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -explain why you want to take time off work -give details of the amount of time you need -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to apprise you, that I am in an exceptional situation and that has left me with no other option but to take a short leave from my duties. I would like to avail these leaves at the earliest, as I am under a medical condition, which requires rest.
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 weekend, I met my family doctor, as I had a complaint regarding pain in my neck. He has found that it is a Repetitive Strain Injury (RSI) case. In simple words, I am suffering from spondylitis. He has suggested
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go on a
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 for a couple of days, by making a mark that it is inevitable. During my time off, my co-worker will be able to take up my task and responsibilities. I had already intimated him and he had an affirmative stand on it. Looking into the gravity of
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 matter, I am requesting you to grant me permission to take a week off on an urgent basis. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards Nishant Chawda
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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