Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work.

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Some
people
believe having a good relationship with
co-worker
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is very important, while others say it is not
nassery
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mastery
monastery
to
work
at the workplace.
This
essay will discuss both sides. On the one hand, Many workers believe having friends in the company is very positive to
work
together.
For example
, if
people
have to
work
with the team, they have to be good associates to make the
work
come out smoothly, because they have to argue with
co-worker
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a co-worker
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about the project easier more than
people
who do not care about having
relationship
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a relationship
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in the company, and
also
it make
work
to the same direction that the worker
want
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.
In addition
,
college
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the college
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can advise and help
about
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the project.
For instance
, if you have a problem or can not produce productive
work
, they can help with the
ideas
.
On the other hand
, some
people
think that it is not the main factor in having friends in the office. It is more comfortable than working with other
people
because they are not concerned about when they have different
ideas
, and do not worry about having a conflict.
Moreover
,
people
can put any
ideas
in their
work
.
For instance
,
Many
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people
have many
ideas
,
people
can not put their own
ideas
to
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the project and they have to accept different
ideas
with their
college
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. In conclusion,
although
having friends in the workplace is the main factor
to
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for
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working in the company, Some
people
think it is not the key to working
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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