Some people believe that range of technology currently is increasing gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing opposite . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The technological

advencement

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advancement

advancements

gives people to

communicate

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each other a lot,

hovewer

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however

, some poor persons can not let themself to use same technologies,

therefore

, the society would

broke

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up. From my point of view, current

inovations

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innovations

let any man or women reach

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class of society

rathen

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rather

there any social status.

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essay

discuss

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the

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both views.

Accourding

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According

to some,

wearth

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wealth

wealthy

people have been creating the hi-tech industrial in order to manage

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of

humanety

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humanity

.

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, they restrict

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access

on

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the Internet, do not allow to use

a

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lot of hi-tech devices and online web services.

For example

, the Linkedin service was disallowed into many countries,

such

as Russian. They prevent sharing of

expireance

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experience

speciality between

wearth

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wealth

wealthy

earth

and poor classes to weak there

influency

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influence

on the world.

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to

other

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, people are lived in poor countries and could not be

traveled

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around the world, using new technology, can touch a new virtual world by the Internet.

Moreover

, they can study online, discuss different topics with other persons, earn money do not go out.

For instance

, many current success

famosts

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famous

were not rich in the past and I

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that they reach current highers due to using technology

also

.

Therefore

, there views spread around individuals and leads to

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creation

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ever new

aprouches

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approaches

of

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expressing their talent.

For instance

, a lot of persons are opening channels on youtube. In conclusion, different groups of

inovations

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innovations

let everybody improve

there

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skills which will play

a

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main goal in

collapce

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collapse

society. Eventually, it gives us

equal

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community.