The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree?

A heavy bank balance should not be the base for providing quality

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to a person. Definitely, It is the government's responsibility to provide good

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service to the public of its

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. I am agreed with the aforesaid statement to a great extent for the reasons stated in the coming paragraphs.

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of all, it is a basic human right of everyone to be strong and healthy and the government of a

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is always liable for protecting the common rights of its citizens.

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elect the beaurocrats because they believe that it will ensure the security of their human rights.

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, a recent survey has shown that most of the public of India had given their votes to BJP which is a current ruling party of India, on the basis of its promise for free and quality

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for every citizen.

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, it is not fulfilled yet and the public is under great anger against the said party nowadays.

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, healthy

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can contribute more to the economy.

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, the strong the

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, the rapid the growth of the economy of a

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or vice-versa.

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, healthy folks can work more actively and can lead to speedy growth in

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economic development which is the prominent objective of the government of any

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.

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, rich

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can take care of their well-being as they already have enough money for it, but poor

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have to suffer due to the lack of funds. So it becomes the duty of governments to give superb health benefits to everyone. In conclusion, since the wealthy and the

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both

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equally to the economic development of a

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,

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governments should always ensure the best

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services

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their citizens despite any discrimination.