children are currently having extra classes after normal lessons. what are the positive and negative effects? what is your opinion

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Nowadays, not only adults are busy with their works, but
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school-age kid is getting busy with hours than their
parents
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did before. As fact that extra
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become acceptable in some many countries. Especially in Asian schools, the children now struggle more nerve-racking problems with them in society.
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, attending to many extra
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on weekdays even at weekends leads to a lack of
time
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for
kids
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. As result, they do not have an hour to spend on developing their hobbies
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as how to play an instrument or playing sports outside that develop their health as well as mental health.
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, due to lack of
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the
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they can not spend
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with their friends or taking part in social activity.
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, their ability to communication with others and lack of social skills now become serious to
parents
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when raising
kids
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.
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, the expectation of children from
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put them under pressure as
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want their
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always on top in every academic test. According to, the research over studying does not make children intelligent or smarter.
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, attending too many extra
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such
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as maths or science subjects can cause teenager’s cognitive impairment especially for young
kids
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.
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, kindergarten and primary school students due to a large amount of
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focusing, lacking sleep and being stress.
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, extra
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provided a theoretical lesson which is mostly the same has compulsory
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while teenager needs to have particular knowledge, critical thinking and so on. To conclude,
parents
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should join hand to create
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kind of education
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which has the creative, practical and stress-free environment for their kid and extra
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should be banned.
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