THE NUMBER OF CHILDREN THAT READ BOOKS FOR FUN HAS DROPPED DRAMATICALLY IN RECENT YEARS. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? HOW WE ENCOURAGE CHILDREN TO READ MORE?

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to researchers from two important Italian University, the number of juvenile people that read
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for fun went down
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in recent years. Nowadays, is recognize that kids prefer to spend time in front of their personal computer or their PlayStation. In fact, they are considered people from a new “technological Era” and they are no longer stimulated by paper
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of all, there are many reasons for
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issue. In our days, there are many problems that started
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school authorities. Indeed, the main cause of
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is registered in children’s school daily routine. They are usually constrained to pay attention in front of their classic paper
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them in other contemporary ways
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, when professors assign
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to read to their students, often they are choosing by the teachers and it could limit
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of our teenagers.
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, there are some ways to encourage children to read more.
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, it is time to change the teaching methods in school’s institute, in
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is necessary to make an important revolution: it will concern to remove the oldest education process and introduce new teaching procedure.
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, is important to start to use digital
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what type of
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for school purposes. In
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an important role of parents is that they have to explain to their children the
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reading
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skills.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proliferation
  • Screen-based entertainment
  • Deprioritizing
  • Storytelling
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Underfunded
  • Affordability
  • Curriculums
  • Foster
  • Digital-native generation
  • Gamify
  • Community-driven
  • Diverse collection
  • Milestones
  • Incentivize
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