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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

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It is a fact that there are a lot of
languages
 ​​spoken in the
World
. Some
People
 believe that out Of these many
Languages
 some disappear which is very useful for society.
However
, I differ from them and opine that all the speeches have their importance and these are very beneficial for the individuals as well as for society. Going with the
first
 school of thought It Is undeniable out of hundred of
Languages
, few mother tongues are extinct due to the Globalization and Westernization of European and American,
people
 forced to communicate in English German and French as a Comparison to Speak their
languages
. Other
people
 think that the extinction of these
languages
 are not a threat to society because it is used or spoken by fewer
people
.
Therefore
, it is not making any significant impact on the
world
.
Besides
this
, the usage of international
languages
 ​​have business interaction among different countries become easier.
On the Other hand
, there are uncountable
languages
 which are existed due to their uniqueness of the
world
 cultures. It is necessary to maintain the diversity of
world
languages
 since each of the
languages
 represents the community or a tribe.
Although
 it used by several
people
,
however
, it has an important function. Many of the myths or the religious scripts are documented in their
languages
 which can't be ignored or replaced with any other language. In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that the use of a few
languages
 is making life easier. Variety of,
languages
 shows the cultural diversity which passes to the
next
 generation
also
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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