Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of

governments

think that the most important goal in the

country

is

the

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economic

progress

, while many people believe that other types of

progress

are equally important as well. It is indisputable that the great status of financial in the government is the best concerned for our

society

.

However

, I believed that there are various

systems

that need

the

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similar concern from the

governments

. According to

this

statement, most of the

governments

in every

country

focus on

the

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economic

progress

to improve the well-being of people in the

country

.

For example

, the

governments

need a requirement of taxation payments from citizens or business both in local and foreign companies to use that money

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public infrastructures

such

as roads or transportations in that

country

. No one can deny the fact that

financial

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system is one of the important

systems

to enhance the quality of life nowadays; thereby some

governments

put

the

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great effort to make it receive the best

progress

.

In contrast

, there are several

systems

in

the

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society

that need the same concern from the

governments

.

For instance

, the education system and the healthcare system should be considered as the major

systems

to improve the quality of

the

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society

as well. The countries that have strong education

systems

will

progress

enormously in long term goal because they will have the quality human resources to develop the work and

systems

in the

country

.

Moreover

, good healthcare

systems

can more people stay

in

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healthy and expand their life expectancy. In conclusion,

the

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economic

progress

is very important to our

society

nowadays.

Nevertheless

, there are other types of

progress

that need an equal focus to improve to make our

society

grow in

the

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sustainable ways.