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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A lot of
governments
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 think that the most important goal in the
country
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 is
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economic
progress
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, while many people believe that other types of
progress
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 are equally important as well. It is indisputable that the great status of financial in the government is the best concerned for our
society
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.
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, I believed that there are various
systems
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 that need
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 similar concern from the
governments
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. According to
this
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 statement, most of the
governments
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 in every
country
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 focus on
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economic
progress
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 to improve the well-being of people in the
country
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.
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, the
governments
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 need a requirement of taxation payments from citizens or business both in local and foreign companies to use that money
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develop
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public infrastructures
such
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 as roads or transportations in that
country
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. No one can deny the fact that
financial
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 system is one of the important
systems
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 to enhance the quality of life nowadays; thereby some
governments
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 put
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 great effort to make it receive the best
progress
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.
In contrast
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, there are several
systems
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 in
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society
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 that need the same concern from the
governments
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.
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, the education system and the healthcare system should be considered as the major
systems
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 to improve the quality of
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society
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 as well. The countries that have strong education
systems
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 will
progress
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 enormously in long term goal because they will have the quality human resources to develop the work and
systems
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 in the
country
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.
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, good healthcare
systems
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 can more people stay
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healthy and expand their life expectancy. In conclusion,
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economic
progress
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 is very important to our
society
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 nowadays.
Nevertheless
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, there are other types of
progress
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 that need an equal focus to improve to make our
society
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 grow in
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sustainable ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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