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Nowadays, many people think that we should live with climate change instead of preventing it. Do you agree or not?

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In recent times,
climate
change
 has become a cause of concern for many
people
therefore
 some individuals are of the opinion that we should embrace
climate
change
 rather than preventing it. I disagree with
this
 viewpoint as I believe that the forecasted disadvantages of
climate
change
is
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 quite detrimental .
Firstly
, the world has begun to feel the negative effects of
climate
change
 and
as a result
, various countries are starting to experience unpredictable weather changes.
For example
, in the United States of America, some states like Texas experienced a destructive snowstorm that claimed a few lives but many houses.
As a result
, many
people
 had to go days without light and water, some
people
 lost their livelihoods and others millions of dollars worth of properties. It has been noted that Texas rarely experiences winter.
This
 new development was attributed to
climate
change
 by meteorologists. The damage caused to the ozone layer by human's constant pollution is dangerous for every living creature and
therefore
people
 cannot live in unbearable conditions caused by these problems
Furthermore
, the idea that we should seat around and allow calamity to befall our planet is absurd because if we do so the world would literally end as we know it.
For example
, the weather would become unbearable and unpredictable, the ice glaciers would melt off, the sea levels would rise rapidly, our ecosystem would be damaged, many animals would become extinct, the air would be polluted to name a few. In conclusion, there are numerous difficulties that would be experienced by the planet and its inhabitants if nothing is done to prevent
climate
change
. Understandably the methods of
climate
change
 prevention may be expensive
however
, we owe it to future generations that they inherit a safe environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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