Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns. Do more advantages or disadvantages?

In today's world, a certain part of

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society

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urban

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to

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. There are a

lot

of

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on the topic

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this

tendency has more merits or demerits.

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for the arguments which will be covered below.

To begin

with, it is very important to mention that cities have a

lot

of air pollution that, in turn, may impact humans' health.

This

is because of the fact that not only are a

lot

of factories and enterprises located in towns and they produce carbon dioxide emissions but

also

due to a high level of traffic air becomes dirty rapidly.

Therefore

, when people inhale

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it may influence their lungs and lead to a variety of diseases.

For instance

, recent

researh

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research

has shown that those living in industrial

areas

have a 20% higher risk to be affected by pneumonia.

Moreover

, another visible disadvantage of life in urban

areas

is that there is a rapid style of life and it may be very energy-consuming. The main reason for

this

is that not only is everyone in the city always in hurry but

also

the bustling society does not give you an opportunity to stay calm and relax.

As a result

, citizens might become very stressful and the level of

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their

the

aggressiveness will increase considerably.

For example

, one study has illustrated that more than 40% of

habitants

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of

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New York have a significant level of anxiety during the day. Eventually, to conclude, in my opinion,

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of life in urban

areas

far outweigh its benefits.

This

is due to the fact that,

firstly

, air pollution might affect

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lungs and,

secondly

, since

such

kind of a lifestyle takes a

lot

of energy and may lead to

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increased anxiety.