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Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?

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According to survey reports, in numerous nations individuals do not die easily;
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, inclined life expectancy has a large number of issues not only for ageing individuals but
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 for the community.
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 as helpful in raising
children
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 and they have much
knowledge
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 about tradition.
To begin
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 with, as older individuals have lots of experience about the look after
children
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 as compared to new parents
therefore
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, raising
children
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 can be done by older. To explain, in
this
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 modern era both men and women are working, and at
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 time, they need a person who cares about their
children
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 carefully.
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, if older people available at home, they can look after their grandchildren.
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, In India, most pupils are raised by their
grandparents
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 because they have much
knowledge
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 about developing
children
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.
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,
current
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 generation can learn a wide range of things from their longer living
grandparents
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. Moving
further
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, having the depth of
knowledge
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 not only about tradition but
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 about other things. They can spread
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 information among their
children
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 as well as those who live in a community. To elaborate, since today younger generation does not have much
knowledge
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 whether about their culture or festivals, so information regarding culture can be gained by them from their longer living
grandparents
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.
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, foreigners do not have in-depth
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knowledge
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 regarding their culture because they live separate from families and sometimes longer living
grandparents
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 are not in their family.
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, cultural awareness can be spread among the current generation because of longer living elders. To conclude, longer living elders look after
children
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 with their
knowledge
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.
Moreover
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, they have more cultural information.
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