In many cities, many people are living in large apartment blocks. Does this this accommodation has more advantages than disadvantages

Living in big

flats

has been getting more and more widespread. Many people say that these large accommodation blocks are more comfortable than small

flats

.I am of the opinion that the aforementioned

apartments

offer residents

to

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live

in

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high quality

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life.

However

, its negative sides are more dominant than its positives like safety and

the

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environment

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problems. It is truly evident that big

apartments

enhance the quality of families’ life because it offers to live in

private

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a private

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room

for each family member. Especially, large domestics can easily adjust themselves fully to large house style because

private

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the private

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room

gives the emotion of freedom.

In addition

, self-confidence

are

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shaped by freedom.

Therefore

, each family members can boost their confidence. To exemplify, according to the research in the US, children who have

an

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own

room

are predisposed to reflect their thoughts and emotions easily in the

environment

of

classroom

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.

This

is because they have a chance to do what they want in their own

room

and

this

situation develops their self-confidence. Despite having positive aspects of living in large

flats

, these

apartments

poses

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a threat

for

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the

environment

because these cause the degradation of green areas.

This

situation stems from commercial purposes because many builders and municipalities destroy green belts and

also

cut down trees ,for the sake of earning lots of money.

For instance

, in the north of Turkey, builders have made

a big

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apartments

and

this

situation happened with destroying the beauty of nature.

Therefore

,

its

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the

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balance of weather has been disturbed ,and even the raining rate has decreased.It is worthwhile to note that some illnesses like cancer are emerged due to the worsening of the weather.

On the other hand

, some safety problems can

be emerged

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in large

apartments

like fire.

This

is because

apartments

which have lots of rooms are connected with each other.If

fire

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the fire

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is start

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in another

room

, all of them are affected. Even if many experts have conducted studies to overcome

this

problem, it cannot be possible

tackle

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it fully.Yet, it possible to alleviate it like to call

fire

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brigade immediately.That’s why living in these

flats

can be risky. To sum up, large flat blocks enable families to have a private

room

, and

this

brings them freedom and self-confidence.

However

, these

apartments

have more drawbacks than

its

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positive sides like safety problem and deterioration of the

environment

.These plays

crucial

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role in our life and attaching importance to alleviate these issues is necessary.