Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Social media usage has been getting more and more widespread . Some
sites
like Facebook or Use synonyms
twitter
have known by all type of Change the capitalization
Twitter
people
.It is believed that the aforementioned Use synonyms
sites
are detrimental to Use synonyms
the
individuals and communities life. I am of the opinion that social Correct article usage
apply
sites
have a good impact on academic and business life. Use synonyms
However
, it is evident that many Linking Words
people
are predisposed to asocial and addictive due to Use synonyms
the
these Remove the article
apply
sites
.
It is truly obvious that social Use synonyms
sites
make Use synonyms
people
be asocial because these offer user to access what they want.Use synonyms
Therefore
, they start to live close Linking Words
with
them because these make them be addictive .Change preposition
to
However
, they refrain from Linking Words
to spend
time with their friends or families .Both individuals and communities are affected Change the verb form
spending
from
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by
this
situation because become addicted to these Linking Words
sites
destroys communications. To exemplify, according to some researches, Use synonyms
new
generation Correct article usage
the new
do
not want to communicate with each other because they can not adjust themselves in the environment of school or other areas. Change the verb form
does
This
is because they do not Linking Words
know
spend time Add the particle
toknow
in
face to face because they know how to communicate with each other Change preposition
apply
in
social Change preposition
on
sites
. That’s why they encounter some problems Use synonyms
for
maintaining socialization.
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in
On the other hand
, these Linking Words
sites
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aids
students to be effective because it accelerates Change the verb form
aid
working
process.Add an article
the working
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many
prospective business man or woman Replace the quantifier
much
have
a Twitter account and it is possible to reach them via Change the verb form
has
this
platform. Linking Words
For instance
, as a student, ı can easily text with my teacher Linking Words
in
WhatsApp.Especially, if ı had a problem with my assignments, ı can consult my classmate about it.In Change preposition
on
this
way, ı do not need to go to the university, and ı both saved time and alleviated my problem. It is worthwhile to note that employees benefit from these Linking Words
sites
like zoom because many interviews with abroad or Use synonyms
collaborates
are made by it. Replace the word
collaborators
Thus
, they can easily adjust themselves fully to the conversation thanks to easy access.
To sum up, social networking Linking Words
sites
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leads
to Change the verb form
lead
communication
problem because it makes Add an article
a communication
people
asocial. Despite having Use synonyms
this
issue, for students and workers , some opportunities like accessibility in Linking Words
their
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there
are
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area
are
emerged. It is Remove the redundancy
apply
more
convenient way for me because ı can easily overcome my problems Add an article
a more
about
my assignments.Change preposition
with
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite