Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The discussion about whether or not
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has a significant influence on
people
in terms of making decisions raises a thorny question in today's complex society.
Although
there are good arguments in favour of
people
claiming there is no real impact, I strongly believe that
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decision-making process can be affected by advertising. There are several reasons why a decision-making process could not be driven by advertisement. The main cause is that
people
are already aware of the purpose of the
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company.
Therefore
, most
people
consider that they try to sell their own
product
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products
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or others' goods.
In other words
, they just want to tempt us to buy something by using fake advertising, so many
people
know
this
and
dont
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don't
do the shopping by going to the physical store or online.
For example
, energy drinks being displayed on TV are claimed to give energy to
people
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, but
it
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is totally wrong. And most of us know that it does not have any influence on
people
. Despite the above arguments, I tend to believe that advertising is created in order to affect
people
's decisions before being made. It can be argued that promotions
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frequently on TV could probably permeate into peoples' subconscious.
Thus
, companies are paying a whopping amount of money to make
people
buy their commodities. It is obvious that governments are
also
using advertising to make a demand for any kind of product.
For instance
, they can advertise a machine which is fuelled by charcoal,
as a result
,
this
product can be bought by
people
and the demand for charcoal will be increased automatically.
To conclude
, despite some facts that show there is little or no impact in the view of
people
's decision-making process, I am inclined to believe that advertising can be absorbed by our mind and can have a great influence on decisions made by us.
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