Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.

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There is no doubt these days the importance of machinery in our lives either in working or studying
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in playing video games.Some people think
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is a negative development.While others believe is a positive thing to know how to work or study from
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I am going to discuss both pros and cons of using automation from
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and draw my personal conclusion. In the term of the positive side, one of the most significant benefits of using
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in the
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for studying and working. The main reason is given to support
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erasability of choosing the free time and not limited in a certain book and other reference or in a programme.
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reason is that becoming more up to date in their work or in the study to feet the requirement and be more qualified in the position , to illustrate , the development of the
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as a pharmacist by the
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some people think there is a con to using
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, the children becoming more dependent on
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for homework rather than search in their book copying the
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social media will take the children from studying . In ,conclusion
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the use of
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on children is a
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, I believe that the advantage outweigh the disadvantage
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