The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.

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It is true that
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increasing
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more harm to the whole
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, without any discrimination to both developed and
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countries. There are many challenges due to
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problem, which are common to all,
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as depletion of
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and lack of food and shelter are few of them
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population
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indefinitely leads to the faster depletion of natural
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like water and forest. These
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are already
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the verge of disappearance. Many countries are already affected
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climate changes,
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deforestation
, water pollution due to their overpopulation. On top
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,
increasing
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number
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of people
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the limited space will lead to
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depletion and disaster.
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like Brazil is a good example
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overpopulation
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population
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issues.
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natural
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they are still suffering
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malnutrition, lack of drinking water and housing problems.
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proper contraception is the only effective way to address the above
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obstacles
. Governments and other organization should focus on increasing the
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acceptance
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there should be a mechanism to increase the
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awareness
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problem among young couples, which can be done through schools and
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effectively. China has done
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succesfully
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successfully
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through
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strict law. By limiting the number of children to two for a couple, China could
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many of the economic targets and ultimately became a
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power. In conclusion,
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world
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population
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has many disadvantages to the current
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.
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ideal contraception is the only effective solution that could
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address
the issues like shrinkage of natural
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and
deforestartion
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deforestation
which are caused by
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overpopulation
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population
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.
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