The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.
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exponentially
world
population
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causing
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more harm to the whole Correct your spelling
causing
world
, without any discrimination to both developed and under developed
countries. There are many challenges due to Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
this
problem, which are common to all, such
as depletion of resources
and lack of food and shelter are few of them This
essay will discuss those problems and possible remedies.
Increasing world
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the world
population
indefinitely leads to the faster depletion of natural resources
like water and forest. These resources
are already in
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on
with
climate changes, Change preposition
by
deforestration
, water pollution due to their overpopulation. On top Correct your spelling
deforestation
that
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of that
increasing
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the increasing
an increasing
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of people Correct article usage
the number
with in
the limited space will lead to Correct your spelling
within
further
depletion and disaster. Country
like Brazil is a good example Add an article
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overpopulation
population
issues. Eventhough
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Even though
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many
resources
they are still suffering with
malnutrition, lack of drinking water and housing problems.
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from
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Advocating
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obstacles
acceptence
of proper contraception methods among the public. Correct your spelling
acceptance
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addition
there should be a mechanism to increase the Add a comma
,addition
awarness
of Correct your spelling
awareness
this
problem among young couples, which can be done through schools and Correct your spelling
media
medias
effectively. China has done Correct your spelling
media
this
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successfully
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apply
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many of the economic targets and ultimately became a Change the verb form
reach
world
power.
In conclusion, ever growing
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ever-growing
world
population
has many disadvantages to the current world
. Promating
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apply
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deforestation
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