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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems

#country #language
The issue of whether living in a country where you have to speak
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language
 may cause
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problems
 is certainly a contentious
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.
However
,
this
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agreement
 is unconvincing since
language
 is not the only tool to explore a foreign country. Two of the principal reasons for
this
 are as follow.
One
 primary reason is getting
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 with
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citizens. The
immigrates
 can take a lot of time to make a new friend who is living in the local places. Thanks to these citizens, the
immigrates
 can understand more the culture and explore the lifestyle of a country rapidly.
In addition
, people can avoid
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some serious
problems
 by understanding the local rules.
One
 drawback,
however
, not all of the
immigrates
 may live in
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rural places where have
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neighbors
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. It is unlikely to conquer
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cultural
problems
.
In
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 to
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 alone with
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neighbors
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neighbors
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,
immigrates
 can decrease the rates of serious
problems
, because
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technology has alleviated the
language
 barrier. Through the evolution of time, digital devices and
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 are becoming a part of
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life. People can figure out the
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unfamiliar
 rules or tourist destination by searching on the internet. Not only translate the foreign
language
also
 offer a lot of information. In conclusion,
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 of technology can decrease considerably the practical
problems
, understanding the rules and habit of the local places is the
one
 approach to connect deeply with the citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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