Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is sometimes argued that environment-related issues

better

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tackle

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globally,

however

, there are those who assume that it should be dealt

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a national level. I strongly believe that,

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by

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global cooperation, the environmental degradation problem could be tackled more effectively and comprehensively.

First,

this

essay will discuss solving the issue nationally because of the difference

of

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problems

, and

secondly

, will analyze the lack of resources as the biggest reason for worldwide collaboration. On the one hand, proponents of national tackling environmental concerns, believe that issues may vary considerably from

country

to

country

and an individual approach is more appropriate. The reason for

this

is that almost in each nation causes and nature of the issue are different,

while

one

country

may suffer from air pollution, another might struggle with

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rate

deforestation

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.

Therefore

, factors contributing to these

problems

are not identical and measures

also

should vary.

As a result

, by planning solutions independently, the authorities could pass

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environmental

lows

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laws

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and implement them efficiently. A prime example is Indonesia, where

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a huge problem with plastic pollution in the ocean, and the government has banned the use and sale of it.

However

, these arguments are flawed mainly because the outcome of measures taken only by one

country

might be tremendously

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than it may be from worldwide collaboration.

On the other hand

, opponents assume that cooperation is the most effective way to cope with environmental

problems

, because it could be challenging to tackle them individually

due to

poor knowledge of handling the concern and shortage of resources, and I agree.

This

is because some developing

counties

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might

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resources like finance and technology and may seek help.

Hence

, here comes the role of international bodies,

such

as the United Union, which can serve as a regulating body by identifying certain environmental concerns,

such

as global warming, which could be tackled more efficiently worldwide than nationally. Not only is identifying

problems

crucial but

also

providing various alternatives and environmental policies which all

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nations should abide

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For example

, the European Union took recycling measures to reduce the outcome of a huge amount of garbage. In conclusion, though people may vary in their opinions, I am highly convinced that active collaboration from nations worldwide could be the best way to tackle these terrifying environmental

problems

.

This

is

due to

the fact that it might help

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who has a shortage of knowledge and finance and

also

solve problem comprehensively, despite the fact that some issues might vary in countries.