Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is sometimes argued that environment-related issues
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globally,
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, there are those who assume that it should be dealt
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a national level. I strongly believe that,
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global cooperation, the environmental degradation problem could be tackled more effectively and comprehensively.
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essay will discuss solving the issue nationally because of the difference
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, and
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, will analyze the lack of resources as the biggest reason for worldwide collaboration. On the one hand, proponents of national tackling environmental concerns, believe that issues may vary considerably from
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to
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and an individual approach is more appropriate. The reason for
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is that almost in each nation causes and nature of the issue are different,
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one
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may suffer from air pollution, another might struggle with
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rate
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.
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, factors contributing to these
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are not identical and measures
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should vary.
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, by planning solutions independently, the authorities could pass
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environmental
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laws
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and implement them efficiently. A prime example is Indonesia, where
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a huge problem with plastic pollution in the ocean, and the government has banned the use and sale of it.
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, these arguments are flawed mainly because the outcome of measures taken only by one
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might be tremendously
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than it may be from worldwide collaboration.
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, opponents assume that cooperation is the most effective way to cope with environmental
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, because it could be challenging to tackle them individually
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poor knowledge of handling the concern and shortage of resources, and I agree.
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is because some developing
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might
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resources like finance and technology and may seek help.
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, here comes the role of international bodies,
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as the United Union, which can serve as a regulating body by identifying certain environmental concerns,
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as global warming, which could be tackled more efficiently worldwide than nationally. Not only is identifying
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crucial but
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providing various alternatives and environmental policies which all
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nations should abide
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, the European Union took recycling measures to reduce the outcome of a huge amount of garbage. In conclusion, though people may vary in their opinions, I am highly convinced that active collaboration from nations worldwide could be the best way to tackle these terrifying environmental
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the fact that it might help
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who has a shortage of knowledge and finance and
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solve problem comprehensively, despite the fact that some issues might vary in countries.
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task response
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the topic and maintains a clear, logical progression of ideas throughout the essay. Also, make sure to fully address the task by discussing both sides of the argument in a balanced way.
coherence and cohesion
The essay demonstrates a clear introduction and conclusion, which is good. However, it would benefit from stronger topic sentences within each body paragraph to clearly introduce the main point of each paragraph, leading to a more cohesive and coherent essay.
lexical resource
The vocabulary used in the essay is quite varied and appropriate for the most part. However, consider incorporating more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource further.
grammatical range
The essay shows a good range of grammar with complex and simple sentence structures. To further improve, aim for more accurate and precise use of grammar and ensure that sentence structures are varied to demonstrate a wider range of grammar.

Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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