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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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For some
people
 accepting difficult situations,
such
 as disappointing jobs or a lack of money, is the best option while others disagree and claim that trying hard to enhance them is greater.
This
 essay will argue both points of views. On the one hand, living
a
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situation
 where there is something that
people
 do not like, is for those who satisfied themselves simply and with basic things of life.
In addition
, they do not need anything to change their position. Indeed, it has been studied that
people
 that are not completely happy
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 the
situation
 in which they are, are in the same way, not motivated to do something to change because of the fear or the negligence for the new. As a consequence, these
people
 are not inclined to do something to improve their own
situation
 and they
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 the end, accept it.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe that certain circumstances are the trampoline to turn in something new. Facing the challenge requires being open-minded and having initiative
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 In
this
 way, these kinds of
people
 rather than remain in the same
situation
, are ready in order to, at least, try to improve their condition, considering all the risks. Taking the two sides of the coin
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 example, one is staying in the same
situation
, the other is changing it. Are the consequences worth the risks? In conclusion, settle for a
situation
 that does not completely please some
people
,
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is a good choice because it can not be worse. The other group of
people
 claim that improvements mean feeling better thanks to the sensation of having tried at least. I believe that everyone should follow their feelings and their priorities but most of the time we accept a
situation
 that does not totally please us while there are many possibilities in
this
 world.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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