A friend has written to you asking for advice about problem at work you have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: -Tell your friend you understand the problem. -Explain what happened to you in the past -suggest possible solutions to the problems.

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Dear Akshay, I'

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sorry that I couldn't write to you any earlier but I've been really busy with work. I came to know about your trouble after reading your letter and I'

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sure you'll be able to come out of

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if you follow my piece of advice. I had already experienced your current situation. While I was working for my

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job. As being a quality control chemist in the pharmaceutical industry it's sometimes difficult for us to troubleshoot the errors caused during HPLC handling. Basically, it's all a technical concept of machinery that we are usually unable to resolve without an engineer. I completely can understand your problem because previously I had faced the same circumstances and got a warning memo without my fault. During an analysis, my system started fluctuating its pressure all of a sudden and I got panicked as usual as it was the day of final dispatch having time

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my seniors used to leave no space to take advantage of

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a situation and exacerbated it. But to my surprise,

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I somehow had managed to stabilize the pressure by following the standard operating procedures which I had skipped in the

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place resulting in that error. I,

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, suggest that before preparing any system keep related 'SOP' in hand to avoid

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unnoticed glitches which can be resolved easily on your own without any assistance. I'

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hoping that my suggestion will prove helpful to you and I'

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looking forward to hearing from you in

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in future. All the best, Jhalak

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
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also
for example
for instance
therefore
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even though
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

263 words

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