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Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods ? Which is the most effective method ?

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Sale
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The sale
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 of a
product
 is the final and most important function in a business enterprise. It involves
in
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the inflow of cash to the
company
.
Increase
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An increase
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 in
sales
 signifies the acceptability of the
product
 of the
company
. It
also
 states how the
company
 will survive in the dynamic business environment in the long run.
Hence
,
companies
 use
different
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a different
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 variety of
methods
 to improve
the
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sales
. There are different
methods
 of marketing
of
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the
product
 which eventually increases the
sale
 of the
product
. Since the market has shifted from producer oriented to
consumer oriented
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consumer-oriented
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. The products are manufactured according to the needs of the consumers.
Companies
tries
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 their best to make the people aware
about
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of
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 the products they supply. There are various modes of selling opted by the
companies
.
For example
 , Advertisements, Celebrity Marketing, publicities, posters or hoardings etc. Out of all the
methods
, Celebrity marketing has proven to be the most successful to increase the
sale
 figures. In the research conducted by ‘ The Economic Times ‘ , it has clearly stated that
companies
 choosing celebrity marketing technique had reported the increase of 150 % of the
sales
 in
last
 3 years which is huge in comparison to
companies
 opting other
methods
.
For example
 , Lloyd
company
 hired
the
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Deepika Padukone and Ranveer Singh for the advertisement of their air-conditioners, which later on saw
the
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a
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 huge jump in the
sale
 figures. In conclusion, we can say that selling is the ultimate and one of the most significant
part
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parts
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among
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of
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 all the other business function and it has to be carried out efficiently. Improvement in
sales
 helps the
company
 to stand out among the competitors and
also
 helps in building the brand image.
Hence
, whichever
the
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method of selling is opted by the
companies
, they must make sure that it is directed towards building the good image of the
company
 and must be towards serving the consumer’s need.
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