In some countries , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people . Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Many people believe that in some nations , it is the most crucial to
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. The main reason is that it is very expensive to buy a home in foreign
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is a positive trend for them.
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essay explains its causes and why it is a good situation , followed by a reasoned conclusion . Some people prefer to live in
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house rather than buying a home . There are some reasons for them.
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or poor
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where $1 is equal to Rs.50-70 for Indian people .
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, it is very expensive to buy a home for them . Another reason is that they alter their workplace often in a year in order to get experience , know
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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