In the last 20 years, the assessment of students has undergone major transformation. Many educational institutions no longer use formal examination as a means of assessment as they believe formal examination results are an unfair indication of a student’s ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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To judge the
student
’s ability
via formal examination
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students
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essay agrees on the concept that knowing student’s
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a student’s
ability
with formal examination
is not fair. Further
, it will also
highlight the benefit of informal examination
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a formal
student
’s ability
will just create anxiety and students
will have very low self-esteem.
To begin
with, there has been a drastic change in educational institutions in past
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the past
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students
fearful which results in poor academic and impact student
mental health. For example
, many developing countries
like Nepal still follow the pattern of formal examination
believing that country will have highly qualified intelligent people. But every year there has been a case that 70% students
fail in those formal exams.
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of students
In addition
, formally examining the student
’s ability
has also
resulted in students
having really low self-esteem. For instance
, there has been a
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countries
where one follows the formal examination
pattern and Correct article usage
the other
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self esteem
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lack
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instead
of checking student
’s ability
with formal examination
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via different assessment, they will have high
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