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It is a common aspiration among young people to run their own business rather than work for an employee. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

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These days, it is a common aim of many people leaving university to try to start up their own
company
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. They believe that that running a
business
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 has many advantages over working for someone else ,
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 as the freedom to make your own decisions. I agree with
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 point of view, but it is important to bear in mind that running a
company
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 does not suit everybody. There are several benefits of setting up your own employment. For me, the main one is that you have room to be creative.
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 of having to follow your employer’s decisions, you can set the goals for the
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 yourself which means that you feel more in control.
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 generally results in people feeling happier in their job. Not only that
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but,
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 you can
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 keep the profits if the team is successful. If all goes well, you will earn far more than if you
work
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 for someone else.
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, if you set up your own graphic design group, and you build a good reputation you will be able to make substantial profits.You will
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 be more motivated to
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 hard, in order to make a success of your
company
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. Having said that , it is undeniable that running a
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 is risky. If there is an economic downturn, or you make mistakes in trade decisions, your
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 go bust, which can mean that you lose everything and you have to lay off your staff.
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, it is very hard to switch off at weekends, because the
business
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 is always in the back of your mind. To sum up,
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 there is no doubt there are some risks associated with running your own
business
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, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks particularly with regard to making a decision.
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, it should be said that not everyone is a risk-taker , and some prefer to
work
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 for someone else.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • implement
  • strategies
  • flexibility
  • diversification
  • innovative
  • fulfillment
  • stress
  • imbalanced
  • crucial
  • financial stability
  • competitive edge
  • adaptability
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