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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

#children #pressures #perspectives #measures
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now a days
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changing
 and we all expect from
childerns
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children
 to do their best in all aspects .
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,
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yough
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you
 generation has been pressurised to
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perform
 well in order to
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maintain
 the
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reputation
 of the family in the society.we should
also
 think from the
childerns
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children
precpective
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perspective
 and understand the trauma they are going through . In
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today's
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the causes of pressures and measures that can prevent them
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one
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 hand,
Parents
 have high expectations from their kids they want them to be excellent in every
feild
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field
. Every parent
want
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 their
children
 to get an education from the best
school
 and to do so
parents
 are putting a lot of pressure on their childer to
prefrom
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perform
preform
 well. For
instant
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 , from education to been socialised every child in 10 out of 1 is
praniod
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paranoid
 by
this
 they have heavier bags
then
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 the student themself.
Moreover
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 after
school
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 they have to
attent
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attend
the
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private coaching too.
Thus
 they have no time left to relax or to enjoy with their friend, or to think about
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other hand , we cannot deny that
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children
childrens
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children
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 are facing
perssure
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pressure
 in terms of
school
 and socialism ,
however
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parents
 should and understand and relax and spend some quality time with their
children
 .
Also
 in
school
 teacher should teach about
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life and education
not
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 about winning and competition . To
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illustrate
 , when
parents
 and
the
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society expects less from their
children
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preforming
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more well
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 in every aspect and
also
 will have the time to enjoy and
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think
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think
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 about their future and what they really
intrested
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interested
 in by doing
this
 we will not only have a
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balance
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 life but
also
 the
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connection
 between
parents
 and
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children
childrens
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children
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 will be good enough to share all the problems they are going through In conclusion,
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 rather
then
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 making our
children
 compete with each other to be the best or to create the best out of them . we should take a step back and ask them to relax and think about the future and what would they want to be
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