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There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to the company arrive. The manager has asked for suggestions on how the reception area could be improved Please write a letter to our manager. In the letter • Describe the complaints • Say why the reception area is important • Suggest how the reception area could be improved

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Dear Saveliy, I'm writing with reference to complaints about the reception area.You have asked me to write a suggestion for our visitor area and I decided to speak with everyone who complained about it.
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, there have been a lot of complaints but the most common was about not fresh air in the room.
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,
people
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 complained about uneducated and untrained workers.Since everyone who comes to us
first
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 sees the reception it is unacceptable that the
first
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 reaction of
people
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 was bad.
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, it was difficult and confusing for
people
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 to find their way to our office. In my opinion, we need to clean the ventilation system as soon as possible and install new air conditioners.For our workers at the
reception
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 you need to conduct training and put audio trackers near their windows and create a plan to talk to the client. And
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 give
people
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 accurate information about where we are and put some badges along the way Hope you would take notice of my complaint and would consider my suggestions for better improvement. Best Regards, Michel.
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