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To what extend is the nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

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Nowadays, many people are afraid of the usage of nuclear power because of the dangers associated with its use. In my opinion,
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 it is true that nuclear weapons pose one of the greatest threat to
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, the operation of nuclear
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 for peaceful purposes
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 carries with it serious risks. On the one hand, many are the benefits that nuclear
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 brings to our
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.
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, nuclear power stations provide an important source of cheap and renewable energy for many industrialized nations and some developing countries.
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, radiation
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 is even adopted to help cure diseases
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 as cancer. In fact, if it is applied to the body it could burn away cancerous cells and give a better
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 to the patient. Nuclear
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 contributes in many ways to improve human
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 and the world too.
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, despite the advancements that
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 has had over the
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 century, many people hold the opinion that risks and misuses are still more than positive aspects.
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, the production of energy from radioactive materials produces nuclear waste which is very difficult to get rid of.
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, using radiations to cure people of cancer not only is not always successful but is even a painful and dangerous procedure.
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, military purposes are one of the most worrying arguments. Despite atomic bombs have completely destroyed cities and caused significant consequences to the
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 of entire nations,
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 as Japan after the Hiroshima and Nagasaki disaster, some countries like Russia do not stop the construction of
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 deadly weapons. In conclusion,
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 there are many peaceful applications of nuclear power that supply improvements, it is difficult not to consider all the still unavoidable risks and abuses.

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