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In many countries to day, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Novels and
dramas
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 are a reflection of
society
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 in general. What is shown in
dramas
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 is similar to what actually happens in our
society
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. In most of many countries today,
crime
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 novels and
dramas
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 related to
crime
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 are becoming common, and individuals are adoring these types of shows and
books
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. In my opinion,
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 is not a positive development for
society
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 as
dramas
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 and
books
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 can be an effective medium to sway the mindset of the
people
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. In
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 essay, I will explain my viewpoint with relevant examples.
To begin
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 with, TV shows and
books
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 are a great source of entertainment and the favourite past-time of
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the
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general public. In recent times,
series
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 and
books
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 related to
crime
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 are gaining more and more popularity.
For example
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, the TV
series
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 named Prison break has become the most popular in the U.S
on
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in
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 2014. The
series
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 plots about
a
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the
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 main actor
planned
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who planned
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 to escape
the
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apply
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prison. The primary reason for
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 is they involve
such
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 stories or characters which
influrence
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influence
 the audience.
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,
people
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start
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 relate their life to
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this
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these
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 types of entertainments.
Crime
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 novels and
books
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 involve violence, robbery and murder, which
people
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 will
think
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tothink
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 refresh them after a long at work.
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, offence related
a
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apply
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books
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 or
series
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 contain content
which
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that
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 is
restrictly
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strictly
restricted
 targeted at the select audience.
This
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 types of
show
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the show
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 cannot be watched with
entire
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the entire
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 family.
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Also
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,Also
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 some
people
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 may
inspired
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be inspired
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 by
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show
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a show
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 and act out the same in their life. In conclusion, in my perspective, production houses and writers should create
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 type of stories which have a beneficial effect on
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. They need to understand their work influence the masses and prevents all the bad behaviour of actors that
people
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 can be imitated by watching or reading
crime
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's book.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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  • thriller
  • suspense
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  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
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  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
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