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In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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While some
people
 agree that producing court trial
videos
 could disturb a percentage of
people
, others think in contradiction to it. I
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 that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages because it could help to irradicate the misconception among common
people
 on what is happening in a
court room
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 and
also
 would help to show the transparency of the existing
law
 system.
To begin
 with, releasing trial
videos
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Youtube and
in
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the
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public channels would help the viewers to better understand in clarity
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how trials are conducted in
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 which would gain
trust
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 of
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 of individuals.
Secondly
, It enhances
people
 to come forward to file cases against anti-social individuals which would in turn help
the
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law
 enforcement to catch the criminals in a faster and efficient manner.
Finally
, due to
this
 common
people
 could live in harmony and peace with other
people
 which would create a better future for the country.
Moreover
, showing
such
videos
 could help to avoid the general bad concept about the present
law
 and order which would help the system to gain the trust back, especially from the young generation.
In addition
,
this
 would
also
 prevent
people
 from illegal activities by creating
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awarness
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awareness
 after watching these shows.
For Instance
, the Judge show broadcasted
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 a public channel in the United States has one of the highest ratings in the year 2019, which is mainly about a judge who takes decisions in an unbiased manner whose ideas
inflenced
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influenced
 a number of
people
 in a good way.
However
, there are some demerits as well while showing
such
 kinds of
videos
 because these
videos
 could be viewed by small children too which would affect or scare them mentally.
As a result
, it could have an impact on their personality development as well as on their career.
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, some regulations have to be imposed while showing it to the
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. To reiterate, in my opinion, the merits outweigh the demerits because while counting the effects of publically producing, it
have
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 more benefits than demerits which could help to build a
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string
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 positive society and a future.
Furthermore
,
introduction
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 of
such
 shows could inspire a lot of
people
 to come forward to reveal the truths
infront
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in front
 of the
law
.
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