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With an increasing communication via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will be a thing of past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Now folks are very eager to communicate
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 other using electronic systems and it creates a reduction of physical conversation. From my perspective,
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 proposition is completely true. It seems undeniable that humans are heading towards technology. Scientists are now very curious to discover
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 things. As a consequence, many digital systems are invented which may affect
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people
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 movement.
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, they can get
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 flexibility to communicate
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 another via electronic devices which
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 reduces their times.
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, some individuals consider that
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 to
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 communications are necessary to elaborate anythings.
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, when a person uses his mobile phones he can easily text a message and it can
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 his time.
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, short term speech cannot accomplish any tasks and
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physical
 talking is needed to complete the work process.
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,
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 are now very busy. They want to imbrue themselves various types of works.
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, communicating via digital systems is the
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priority
. They opt the electronic media so that they can provide and apprehend any information in a flexible way.
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, some folks infer that there is no lasting of these
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 devices and if it creates a problem
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 it is not possible to convey any messages and that time physical communication is the
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first
 aspects.
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, a mobile phone has a
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 period and if it expires it cannot support man anymore.
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, physical communication is good for health where
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 can keep their body fit. In conclusion, conversation via mobile phone or computer is increasing day by day and it conceals the
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 to
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 communications.
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,
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 there are many
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 who would
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like
 to create talk via physical speech. I am
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 my opinion, there is no alternative way of electronic communications and it hides physical chats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolve
  • convenience
  • emotional depth
  • non-verbal cues
  • personal interaction
  • irreplaceable
  • misinterpretation
  • personal connection
  • social impact
  • psychological impact
  • loneliness
  • depression
  • negotiations
  • medical consultations
  • efficiency
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