More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Wild animal extinction is increasing every year and many other

species

will be in danger in the near future. Two of the mains reasons are

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illegal hunting and overpopulation. In

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I will discuss possible solutions to avoid

further

damages.

To begin

with, there are a large

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amount

of illegal Hunters that every single day kill particular

species

with the only purpose of selling some part of the

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body to the black market.

This

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will inevitably lead to the

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of many

species

that cannot reproduce at a high speed, leading to extinction.

In addition

, wealthy people love to shoot

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these

animals

because they find it funny without even realising that many of these are already in danger of

extiction

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extinction

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Furthermore

, the increasing rates of

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in

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country, where most of these mammals lives, has led to a surge in urbanisation. In fact, especially in Africa new cities are being built replacing the wild habitat of many

animals

, causing them to move

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other places less appropriate and in which they need to adapt fastly in order to survive. Having said that, it is crucial to act rapidly to preserve the wild habitat and the

species

that

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in it. One solution to reduce the

extiction

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extinction

extraction

rate could be intensifying the protection of these

animals

by increasing the number of officers that control these areas.

For example

, it will be much more difficult for hunters to kill if they are constantly chased by the police and

this

with surely

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discourage

them in a long run.

However

,

this

is only a fraction of the endangered

animals

killed in the world. In fact, overpopulation and increasing usage of land to built new cities

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much more difficult to prevent.

For instance

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government

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should be more strict in giving away these lands to private corporations and

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that want to expand, creating new businesses that destroy the habitat of the majority of the wild

animals

. In conclusion, the

exctiction

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extinction

extraction

rates

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increasing rapidly and some actions are needed to prevent

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irreversible problem in the future. Illegal hunting should be more controlled by the police, but

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help from the local governments must be taken to protect wild forests in order to reduce the

animals

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risk of

extiction

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extinction

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