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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#software #language #people
It is essential for a
person
 to learn dual
languages
 despite there
is
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 numerous applications which can utilize as
interpreter
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 at present-day. I agree with the statement because it will not only enhance the ability of
individual
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an individual
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 to deal with
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real-world
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real
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 world but
also
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creativity among them. Learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 makes
person
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a person
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 capable to interact with
world
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the world
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. A
person
 who knows multiple
language
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 can communicate easily with other people which help the individual to boost up the confidence and can face the challenge calmly.
For instance
, international students when
travel
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 to
other country
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another country
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 for their better career they will meet multicultural people so if they know
foreign
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the foreign
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language
 they can connect wonderfully.
In addition
 to
this
, foreign
language
 is
also
 useful in
business
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the business
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 sector nowadays, most of
organization
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the organization
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 start using foreign
languages
 to connect with the clients as companies
has
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 multilingual staff.
Therefore
, staff can easily understand
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law enforcement by learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 and improve
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networking with other companies. Study different
language
 other than mother tongue
prompt
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 the creativity. Doing out of the box will help in developing new ideas and will encourage you to think about how to say things in
different
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 way.
For example
, some
languages
 use a different word depending upon the gender of who is being spoken to while others do not.
Furthermore
, some
languages
 have words that do not even
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 in
other
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. So, thinking
how
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 to express
you
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 word will trigger the mind. In conclusion, there is a lot of
program
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 available in
market
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the market
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 that can convert the
languages
, but it is still required to gain knowledge of
foreign
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the foreign
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language
 as it makes an individual more efficient to handle the globe and inspire a
person
 think productive.
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