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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

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Many individuals consider playing computer
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 can be fun and bringing beneficial impacts while others thought it comes with negative effects. In
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 would definitely have more positive effects than negatives.
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 could enhance people’s reaction, decision making as well as communication skills. The game player often has to react and make
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 decision in a very quick manner to be able to enter the
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 level or score higher for the game. After
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 period, their brains will be trained to react faster and making
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 decision without having to spend too much time,
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 kind of skill would apply to their daily lives as well.
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, some
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 would allow the player to interact with others,
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their communication skill and
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teamwork spirit.
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, we can see there are many
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 purpose, which allow players to learn about different culture’s history as well as knowledge in a field which they normally would not have access through their life. In my view, I consider
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 as a book where you can gain knowledge in a more interactive way. On top of
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 game is a recreational activity which may help people to unwind and put aside their problems, it is a good way to destress after a busy working day. In conclusion, I hold the view that playing
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 more beneficial than negative effects, provided that people are mature enough, able to manage their time spend on playing
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 and not to become
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