Because of the global economy. Many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the
last
decade, globalisation has increased drastically and with it also
the way we transport goods
from other country
. Despite the fact that people can Change the wording
another country
other countries
Add a hyphen
by-products
by
Correct your spelling
buy
products
that are cheaper, this
method has a negative impact on global pollution. This
essay,
will discuss why the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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apply
Firstly
, the main reason why any sort of goods
are
transported from foreign countries is that the product will cost less for the final consumers. In fact, as the Change the verb form
is
manifacturing
processes cost half of the price in some countries, companies are more prone to produce Correct your spelling
manufacturing
goods
in China and then
selling them in the U.S.A or in Europe, increasing their revenues esponentially
. Correct your spelling
exponentially
For example
, Alibaba is dominating the market in Asia because of the aforementioned reason, selling billions worth materials
and Change preposition
of materials
products
to companies on the other side of the world and still be able to earn money even paying for the transport. This business models
Change the determiner
This business model
These business models
is
used by the biggest company in the world Change the verb form
are
such
as Apple.
In contrast
, nowadays we are facing the collateral effects of this
methodology as environmental pollution is becoming one of the main concern all around the world. Both airplanes
and ships are the two major causes of air and water pollution respectively. Change the spelling
aeroplanes
Thus
, if we want to ameliorate the environment we should go against this
model and invest more on
companies to produce and sell their Change preposition
in
products
within the same country or continent. Another good example is what happened in the suez
canal a week ago where an enormous ship blocked for 6 days the canal and millions of Change the capitalization
Suez
goods
could not arrive to
the designed destination on time causing problems and billions worth Change the preposition
at
in
losses
.
In conclusion, globalisation has completely changed the way we produce and transport Change preposition
of losses
products
, bringing very little
advantages Correct quantifier usage
few
compare
to the disadvantages. In the future, more attention should be given to sustainable ways to produce Add the particle
to compare
goods
internally and limit the environmental damages by the
transportation methods.Correct article usage
apply
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