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New Delhi : The Central Bureau of Investigation (
CBI
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) has decided to
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 the performance of its investigating officers (
IOs
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) on a monthly basis, a move aimed at increasing the efficiency of the agency, which has a
pendency
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 of at least 700
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 older than a year (according to the latest available data), officials familiar with the matter said on condition of anonymity. Currently, reviews are conducted every quarter. As part of
monthly
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 exercise, the work of
IOs
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 will be rated on the basis of
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the number
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 of charge sheets filed, number of source information reports (SIRs) generated, number of case diaries completed, and whether all processes as mentioned in the
CBI
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Crime
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 Manual l (photographing/video graphing of
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 scene, search proceedings, recording of statements etc) were followed. The
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 record whether formalities
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 as seeking prosecution sanction, expert opinions and proper marking of evidence are being done, the people cited above added. Another important objective of the monthly
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 is to prevent
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 and opportunities for
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, the people said. In January, four agency officers including two deputy superintendents were arrested for weakening the agency’s investigation in bank fraud
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 in lieu of huge bribes. The current quarterly reviews are carried out in all
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 branches and reviewed by the head of branches/zones. The decision to institute a monthly
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 has been taken by interim
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director
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 Praveen Sinha, who, according to one of the officers cited above, felt the pendency in
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 needs to be brought down. To be sure, the monthly
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 is separate from ACRs (annual confidential reports) prepared annually for all government employees. According to the Central Vigilance Commission’s (CVC’s) annual report 2019,
investigation
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the investigation
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 was pending in 744
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cases
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 for at least a year at the end of December 2019 out of which 678 were related to
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 of
Corruption
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 (PC) Act. About, 25
corruption
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cases
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 have been pending for at least five years. Overall, a total of 1,239 investigations and enquiries were pending with
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 till December 2019. In its updated
Crime
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 Manual in December 2020,
CBI
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 stated that investigations in a majority of
corruption
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cases
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 will be completed within nine months. The manual stated that the existing one-year deadline in
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cases
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 will apply only in
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 where a high ranking government official
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 as a joint secretary or secretary is accused, and the probe is being supervised by an officer of additional
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 rank or above in
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. The new
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Crime
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 Manual, updated after 15 years, was largely prepared under the supervision of Sinha
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 when he was the additional
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 of the agency. “He (Praveen Sinha) wants investigations to expedite by
IOs
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 thoroughly doing their work,” said a
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 officer. Former
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 joint
director
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 NR Wassan said, “Earlier there used to be a bi-monthly
review
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 of every
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 branch but it was quite taxing. It has to be seen how so many
IOs
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 will be reviewed every month. If the SPs (Superintendents of Police) and DIGs (Deputy Inspector Generals) do the
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 properly,
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 reviews always help.

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