The media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public because it only has negative influences on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Some
people
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think that the news should stop reporting
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to the public because negative on audiences. There is no denying that if the
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report
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the minutiae of
crimes
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to the public, it will cause social panic. But it would be arbitrary to take a superficial view and conclude that the
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should stop reporting. It believes that the news reporting minutiae of
crimes
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to the public can only hurt the
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, the news reporting
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crime
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to the public
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has positive aspects. Reporting
crime
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details
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to the public is conducive to raising the public's alertness and safety awareness,
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reducing the possibility of being killed.
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,
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year in China, a girl was killed by a ride on a ride-hailing software booked by a taxi-hailing program. The
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reported the story and related
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of the killing on various platforms. Many taxi-hailing operating system companies began to pay attention. Many taxi-hailing operating system companies began to pay attention to the screening of driver hires, and improved the taxi-hailing software, adding real-time positioning, recording, and dialling emergency contact numbers, to provide the public with a safe and secure ride. At the same time, after learning about the report, more public, especially women, will try their best to reduce going out alone at night, carry alarm equipment with them, and be alert and aware of taking a taxi. Admittedly, reporting
crime
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details
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to the public may bring some negative emotions to the public can
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provide an essential anti-
crime
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experience and enhance
people
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's ability to prevent
crime
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. The purpose of reporting
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of
crimes
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is to give the public the right to know the whole truth. If the
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stops
crimes
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, it will perpetuate an ignorant and dangerous environment for the citizens, with many serious consequences. First of all, the
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's behaviour of not telling the public the truth of the event infringes
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people's
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right to know.
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concealment of criminal
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some bureaucrats use their power to sweep that under the carpet. That makes the public blinded by the incomplete information reported by the
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, and it is easy to form incorrect values.
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, there are deeper social problems behind some criminal
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. If the government does not understand and pay attention to these social problems, there will be more tragedies like
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, and
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will be in danger all the time.
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, it is wrong for the
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to stop reporting the
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of
crimes
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to the public because it infringes on the public's own rights and puts
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man and the whole society in unknown danger. Since the
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of
crimes
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play a role, both the
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and the relevant government departments should be more open to the
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, and use
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essential information to prevent similar
crimes
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • excessive media coverage
  • fear and anxiety
  • desensitize
  • criminal activities
  • invade privacy
  • focus on
  • promoting positive stories
  • appropriate context
  • solutions
  • negative influence
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