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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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The
Internet
 has become a huge part of our life and we live with it
everyday
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. It has definitely changed our
life
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, which can cause some drawbacks. The following paragraphs will discuss those disadvantages of the
internet
 and what method can we use in order to solve
this
. Nowadays, there are a large number of students and adults who are addicted to the
internet
, they spend eight and more hours surfing the
internet
, which causes most of them to have a sedentary lifestyle. They do a lack of exercise,
as a result
 of obesity. As I mentioned, their screen time is more than it should be,
consequently
, it causes them to have
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bad
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. Eventually, the thickness of their spectacle lens is gradually getting thicker. As we know,
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addiction
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 the
internet
 can cause various devastating problems to us and our life. But there are still some solutions which can prevent us from being addicted to the
internet
.
Firstly
, you can try to block some websites that you used to visit, as it really can distract you from your daily routine.
For example
, when you are doing homework and it should be done by that day, you should be responsible for it,
instead
 of watching youtube videos.
That is
 why sometimes blocking youtube may be a good idea for you. In conclusion, even though the
internet
 is still necessary for us, addiction is still one of the main problems that the
internet
 created. There are always methods to solve addiction, which can be quite useful as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cybersecurity
  • phishing
  • identity theft
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • social isolation
  • internet addiction
  • data privacy
  • digital literacy
  • regulations
  • awareness programs
  • manipulate
  • proliferation
  • consent
  • escalated
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