Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this viewpoint and give your own opinion.

Through the evolution of time, eating healthy is becoming a major concern. The number of vegetarians has risen significantly. At the same time, they believe eating vegetable can benefit the world and

body

. I similar believe

this

, and two of the principal reasons for

this

are as follow. One primary reason is maintaining a healthy

body

. Some people choose not to eat meat and fish

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because they believe these

food

contain unhealthy fat which can cause heart disease and cholesterol.

Also

, eating vegetarian is a way to avoid hormones used in animal

food

.

Additionally

, research into the development of cancer has provided considerable evidence that a vegetarian diet can reduce the risk for cancer in general. One drawback,

however

, most vegetarian

food

is lack key nutrients which only find in the animal. Having a vegetarian diet with the wrong approach probably cause nutritional deficiency.

In addition

to having a healthy

body

, eating vegetarian is the best way for nature because meat and fish will release a chemical compound called "Dioxins". Most human exposure to dioxins is from the

food

they consume. As

result

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, high levels of dioxins are very dangerous to the environment. What is more, it could impair liver and reproductive function under long-term exposure. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that both keeping health and nature have a positive impact on vegetarianism. It is

imerative

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that we could balance the consumption of meat, fish and vegetable, it would make our

body

become

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healthier.