Some languages spoken by very few people are losing their importance and may become bad extinct completely. Is it a good or bad development?

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more than a hundred languages are being spoken presently. While some of them are used by less number of persons,
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dropping its significance and lead to vanish entirely. In
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essay, I will delve into it as negative progress.
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with, there are many drawbacks if a person stops speaking their native
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of the stumbling blocks is the loss of culture since
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tongue is crucial in everyone's traditions and people who belong to that can teach future generation only by creating awareness among them. So, it is
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duty of every individual to pass their vernacular to their offsprings in order to save their customs.
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to that, a small group of folks may start to feel isolated because fewer persons speak that
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, there will be less diversification in the world.
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with
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global
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communication will ease, nations would lose their own essence.
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, English is spoken by more than eighty-six countries, it does not mean that all the nations would forget their own
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,
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language
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helps in many ways but
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prioritise in order to maintain
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environment on the earth. To conclude, despite the pros of
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language
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, its cons cannot be neglected.
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, people should protect and promote their culture by saving their mother tongue.
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