Too many world historic buildings are in danger and destroyed in many countries. what are the main reasons? How to protect them?

Our historic monuments and architectures
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us
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about our ancestors which
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helps us to understand ourselves. Sadly many of our heritage
sites
are in perils due to
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negligence
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of their respective governments. In
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I will enumerate the reasons
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state and solutions that may help the situation. To embark upon, there are umpteen factors that
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to the sad state of the ancient buildings.
Firstly
it is due to government
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negligence
. Corrupt politicians, not even bothered about public necessities. It is
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impossible to think that they care about the ancient
sites
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due to
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financial
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the allocated funds are not sufficient to maintain them.
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, recently in my home state, the budget allocated for a
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buddhist
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site is 2 lakhs rupees for
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year, which is not only
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sufficient
for the
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salaries.
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, religious fanatism is another factor.
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, in the early
2000's
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, the afghan
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fringe groups destroyed several ancient Hindu and Buddhist statues in the pretext of religion. Despite these consequences, there are
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ways to save our historic
sites
.
Firstly
, The educated sections of the society should mobilize a movement and pressure the respective government's to amend laws to focus on
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restoring the ruined heritage
sites
.
Secondly
, the UNSECO should help the poor nations by allocating the funds.
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effective
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advertisements
may play
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important to increase the footfall
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generating money to fund itself.
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,
government
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should educate the people so that they
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fall into
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of the evil groups which
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reduce their influence. To conclude, the
neglience
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negligence
coupled with poor financial
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and
also
reglious
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religious
fanatism are the reasons for endangering the historic
sites
.
However
with the monetary help of UNSECO and educating the people we can save ancient monuments.
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