The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produces positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Multinational
companies
provides
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numerous benefits to the
people
globally. I strongly agree with
this
statement because these are helping in
increaing
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increasing
employment
opportunities and developing under-developed areas.
Firstly
, these
companies
are helping in generating
employment
. There are areas where
people
are
unemplpoyed
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unemployed
but they have abilities. If
such
companies
are open there,
there
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talents will be utilised well. The educated and deserving
people
get the desiring jobs. These
companies
are giving
employment
to
people
who were unemployed earlier.
For example
, India is the country with the
second highest
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population,
alot
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a lot
of
litterate
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literate
people
are not getting work, multinational
companies
generating
employment
for these
people
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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