Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots? What is your opinion?

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It's argued that with today's advanced automation,

robots

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will replace humans in all

jobs

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in the coming days. I strongly disagree that there are many

jobs

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that cannot be substituted by automation despite the advancement in technology.

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essay will elaborate on few real-time cases.

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, not all task can be replaced.

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, Labour delivery in hospitals must and should be done by doctors, because of complications at times, that need to implement on the spot which only comes with experience.

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with programme implanted might not be the better option.

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, not only

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, we have few more cases where mechanisation fail if replaced. Let's take the pilot,

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like the above case, we need to act on real-time circumstances

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as weather, turbulence etc., where human pilots have no replacement.

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, I strongly oppose the opinion that all

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will be replaced by artificial intelligence. There are few

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that can be replaced by

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in place of humans.

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, in an Insecurity stream

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as bomb dismantles we can save lives if we can use automated gadgets

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as drones and

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. In future we can see way more

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in the military, replacing humans. Other than few tasks, artificial intelligence cannot replace the individual. In conclusion,

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, some argue that

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will be replaced by automation, I strongly believe that a lot of

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may not be substituted by any technology in the coming future.

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, few works can be and should be replaced for human safety as discussed.

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artificial intelligence (AI)
automation
robotics
futuristic developments
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human capabilities
emotional intelligence
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strategic decision-making
nuances of human judgment
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