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Fewer and fewer people walk on daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend time walking?

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Walking has always been considered as one of the best ways to keep fit, yet the
trend
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 of walking is declining among individuals. Fast-paced
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, improved and convenient modes of transportation and technological developments are a few of the reasons behind
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 development, and the
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 can be reversed just by making
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 more aware of their
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 and with a slight change in
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. Earlier, walking was used to be the most used mode to travel from one place to another. With the development of other faster modes of transportation,
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 started to shift from being pedestrians to another alternative of transport, either it is the bicycles of the earlier 20th century to modern era’s cars and aeroplanes.
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, globalization has lead to a fast-paced
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, where everyone tries to utilize the maximum of their time, and walking is somewhat considered a time-consuming practice.
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,
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 are working in multiple shifts and performing different jobs at different places in a day, and they prefer to drive or ride to commute as the hours are saved, which
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 would have been utilized in covering the same distance on foot.
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, to save and utilize the valuable time in a more productive way
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 are not preferring to stroll anymore. ,
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 technological up-gradation has
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 proved to be the contributor to
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trend
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. The tasks which in past required more physical involvement, are being done by machines these days.
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, in the agriculture ,sector there was a lot of walking involved, but now most of the tasks are performed by using tractors and other mechanical equipment
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 resulting in a reduced number of pedestrians.
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 to all the benefits, the ill effects of
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 increasing
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 of not walking much on the
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 of individuals cannot be ignored. More and more
people
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 are getting obese and having other
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 issues. To reverse
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 practice of not being a pedestrian,
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 are needed to be made more aware of the
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 benefits of walking. No vehicle zones can be made to promote walking. In conclusion, the lack of time caused by a fast-paced
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 and the availability of faster transportation means has caused
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 to walk less, and
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 practice can be discouraged by making
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 aware of the
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 benefits of strolling and by setting up some specific walkways and vehicle-free zones.
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