Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and example to support your position.

Nowadays, there are a lot of parents
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their
children
to start learning
English
for their future.
However
, I personally disagree that
children
should begin learning a foreign
language
as soon as possible they start school. I am going to describe the reasons why below the sentences.
First
of all, I have similar experiences that my parents suggested
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that I
study
English
to get them a better job in my future when I was 10. I was not really interested in
English
but I accepted their offer for me and I started learning
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English
. But
i
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didn'
t
have any motivations for a foreign
language
when I was a kid
that is
why I was not able to concentrate on my
study
for
new
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language
. I ended up hating
English
and sort of gave up on studying since I was not curious about it. If the parents put them mandatory to learn something,
children
usually
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loose
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their
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to attempt new things and most likely they will hate trying new things. I recommend that if the
children
have curiosities
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learning a foreign
language
, they can start whenever you want.
Secondly
, the mother
language
is very important for
children
. I know of so many kids from my friends who are bilingual or multilingual. They look obviously confused
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understandings
understanding
when they
study
new different kind of languages even though they don'
t
understand their mother
language
. According to
this
experience,
children
do not need to start learning as soon as they start school since they are still too young and not enough understandings even their
first
language
neither.
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people in childhood is precious enjoyable times. In my opinion,
children
should not be forced and focused to start learning
something
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new languages.
Instead
of studying a foreign
language
,
children
must be enjoying new experiences from their daily life with small activities and adventures. And once they have desires to start learning something
such
as a foreign
language
or new
study
, they can try whatever they want. As soon as they are young or they start school is not a big deal and doesn'
t
matter about it. All that matter is that we have to respect how they feel, what they want to try by themselves. In conclusion, I don'
t
think that
children
should be started learning a new foreign
language
as soon as possible because depending on
children
, different growth so we should
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that the young age should absorb a lot of new languages. All
of
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children
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have the right to enjoy and try whatever they are curious
more
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than learning a foreign
language
.
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