Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and example to support your position.

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Nowadays, there are a lot of parents
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their
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to start learning
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for their future.
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, I personally disagree that
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should begin learning a foreign
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as soon as possible they start school. I am going to describe the reasons why below the sentences.
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of all, I have similar experiences that my parents suggested
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that I
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to get them a better job in my future when I was 10. I was not really interested in
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but I accepted their offer for me and I started learning
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. But
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didn'
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have any motivations for a foreign
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when I was a kid
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why I was not able to concentrate on my
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for
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a new
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. I ended up hating
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and sort of gave up on studying since I was not curious about it. If the parents put them mandatory to learn something,
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usually
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loose
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to attempt new things and most likely they will hate trying new things. I recommend that if the
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have curiosities
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learning a foreign
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, they can start whenever you want.
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, the mother
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is very important for
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. I know of so many kids from my friends who are bilingual or multilingual. They look obviously confused
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understandings
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new different kind of languages even though they don'
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understand their mother
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. According to
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experience,
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do not need to start learning as soon as they start school since they are still too young and not enough understandings even their
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language
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neither.
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people in childhood is precious enjoyable times. In my opinion,
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should not be forced and focused to start learning
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new languages.
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of studying a foreign
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,
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must be enjoying new experiences from their daily life with small activities and adventures. And once they have desires to start learning something
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as a foreign
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or new
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, they can try whatever they want. As soon as they are young or they start school is not a big deal and doesn'
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matter about it. All that matter is that we have to respect how they feel, what they want to try by themselves. In conclusion, I don'
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think that
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should be started learning a new foreign
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as soon as possible because depending on
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, different growth so we should
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that the young age should absorb a lot of new languages. All
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children
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have the right to enjoy and try whatever they are curious
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than learning a foreign
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.
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