It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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steps and learn as much as possible about many possible subjects and careers. Compared with so many good points is hard to argue on its drawbacks. The

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off is that one will have a late start in the professional life or will face difficulties by starting University a

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Topic Vocabulary:

gap year
work experience
internships
traveling
life experiences
personal development
independent
self-reliant
educational progress
graduation timeline
financial burden
academic momentum
structured academic environment

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