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Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year- old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature? Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

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Brain
 study has progressed significantly in the
last
 decade. The human
brain
 controls the functioning of the entire system and emotions are just a byproduct of the chemical activity in the
brain
. So it is no wonder that scientists claim that they can predict propensity for criminal activities in a
child
 by studying his/her
brain
 at the early age of 3. Though external factors influence a
child
's behaviour,
the
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innate qualities decide the character. So it is very
right
 that scientific study of the
brain
 can identify criminals at a tender age. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall delve deep into how
brain
 study will help
parents
 raise children in the
right
 manner. We have innumerous examples to show that a
child
 need not be like his parent. A
child
 born to a criminal may be a morally righteous person. A
child
 born to good
parents
 may involve in unlawful activities. So, it is the
brain
 that decides the character and not the upbringing. In the present century, we are gifted with the option of conducting a
brain
 analysis to determine the
right
 way of taking care of a
child
. Once it is detected that the
child
 has an inclination towards crime,
parents
 can decide the kind of education and nurturing they should receive.
Parents
 can ensure that the
child
 is taught the importance of moral values. They can
also
 teach him/her about the consequences of breaking the law and
instill
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 a sense of fear for doing something wrong in the eyes of the law. They can
also
 watch
his
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 peer group and, in fact, form one for him/her so that good people influence them. Having prior knowledge of the
child
's penchant will help the parent guide him in the
right
 direction. In conclusion, if scientific studies can determine the likelihood of criminal tendencies in a
child
.
Parents
 should make use of
this
 scientific development and decide the mode of children's upbringing to stop them from becoming criminals.
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