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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #students #news #school #waste #time
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When it comes to school, we know that it is the place where
knowledge
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 is provided to students. there are various subjects for both compulsory and practical subjects.
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, it is believed by some people that international news is required for those
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learners
, while there is a
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 whether studying it is a waste of time.
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 essay is going to discuss both of these notions, together with my personal opinion that will be outlined. The
first
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 and foremost reasons pointing out that international
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 should be taught is that 'news' is
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 a kind of '
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'. As can be seen, there are many students in the top rank with the highest scores are lack
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knowledge
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 about the incidents that currently happen now in other countries that they think it is
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unnecessary
 to learn. As a
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, they
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choose
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 to ignore it.
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 sounds
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natural
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 but it shows the lack of interest in social issues, which is very important. Like a flip of a coin, as people
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 witnessed with more
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intense
 competitiveness among
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 world, studying what they really need at that time is more pivotal so as to gain
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that is
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 really required.
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 will possibly
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 to a faster development
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 when the unnecessary thing is eliminated. Not to mention the fact that students can find it in almost every kind of
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media
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medias
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media
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 around them, ranging from
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 to online articles, whereas
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self learning
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towars
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towards
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 science and math seems much tougher. As the
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aforementioned
 reason, I
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pen down
 saying that put 'international new' in school's curriculum is more beneficial.
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, the key
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this
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 issue is well-balanced so as to equipped them to be
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rounded person.
Knowledge
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 is not
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necessary
 to be under the context of 'academic', they can be everything around us, as well as those of international news
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