Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
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opine that large outdoor public
buildings
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should be built in cities and towns. I
also
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believe
this
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is crucial because these help the citizens to spend their leisure
time
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and these areas are useful for open markets.
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, town and cities need large open
buildings
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so that
people
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could visit there in their free
time
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. Big cities are congested and highly populated.
People
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live in apartments and small homes. They do not find open places to relax . There are a few places too where they can spend their free
time
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. They need large and open places and
buildings
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to spend quality family
time
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.
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, in Delhi most of the
people
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live in small residential flats, civilians of
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city ask for better open
buildings
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to have better free
time
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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